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October 12, 2019 5:52 pm

Driving through Midleton to visit Advanced Pitstop Tyre Services… my man challenged me to write a poem while I waited for them to change our tyres.

So I did.  This is exactly how I wrote it, in about 20 minutes, with minimal editing.  What do you think?

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Illustration © TASWasteManagementReview

Smooth Skin

Off Old Cork road, turning into Midleton
stacks of life-saving re-treads have Buckley’s
chance of reliving their youth. Discarded tyres

lay stop-piled high; like Auschwitz bodies
deflated, black, aged-old wheel-rings have
reached the end and their final journey.

Unlined rubber circles, low profile cushions
await disposal; melting erasure – incineration.
Their job is complete - no longer needed.

The largest lay prepared, neatly size-stacked,
ready and resigned, proudly age un-marked
claiming their fair share of the dumping ground.

Smaller circles know their place, are thrown
haphazardly because they’ve lost their grip;
swallowed by take-over tyrants, larger than they are.

Tractor workhorses are content to rest, miles-tired,
worn out, knowing they don’t count because the speedy
don’t care – don’t notice how many lines are missing.

 

Frances Macaulay Forde © 2003

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